Busy Bee, a shape poem

I have been working on this for a couple of days. It has provided me with an opportunity to demonstrate the creative process with some of the kids at the school where I work, there were at least six versions before this.

UPDATE: I can see from the statistics for Poemasabi, that this has become the most popular poems on the site. Please, leave a comment. I would love to know how you are using it and what your thoughts on it are. Feel free to use it as an example when teaching. Skip (aka: Poemasabi)

Busy Bee. May, 2011